Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Revenge

   “He broke my heart. He put it in a blender and ripped it into a a million pieces,” cried Ryder.

   “I can’t believe we thought he would be our prince charming! Even though you were the one dating him, he broke my heart too.” Josie mumbled.
  
“Don’t worry you two,” smiled Sailor. “What I have planned for him, will defiantly be revenge.”

   It all started out with three best friends: Josie, Ryder, and Sailor.  They were all crushing on the same jock, Jackson Tate. He was tall and thin, with skater sandy blonde hair, deep blue eyes that looked like the ocean. He had a mind of his own. He was a forward in soccer, forward in hockey, and catcher in baseball. Every girl in the school, even out of the school, wanted him.

   Ryder and Josie were the young ones. They could keep it cool around every guy except Jackson. He made them drool and day dream every minute of the day. Then there was Sailor. She could play cool around everyone, no matter who it was. She could be face to face with Justin Bieber and act like he was her annoying little brother. If that gives you and image of how she was. But Ryder and Josie were never jealous of her, never.
  
   Ryder and Josie were very cute girls. Sailor was cute too, but not as cute as Ryder and Josie.  Josie had long, curly blonde hair with tanned skin, big green eyes, freckles that covered her nose and cheeks, and a thin average height body. Ryder and Josie looked alike in a way. Except Ryder had brown hair, and she had a thin, short body. Sailor was the odd ball. She had straight, medium length, orange hair, brown eyes, and freckles all over her tall, muscular body. She was a giant who towered over everyone, even some guys.

   You could tell these girls were best friends. They all dressed the same, acted the same, had the same grade average, same friends, and same likes and dislikes. They even all liked Jackson the same about, or so they thought, and agreed that they wouldn’t fight over him even if he asked one of them out. They got put to the test when one afternoon Jackson asked Ryder out. All three girls were on cloud nine for a long time, especially Ryder.

   Ryder and Jackson dated for about four months. During those four months the three girls never changed. They still hung out as much as they did before. Ryder never cared that Josie and Sailor still had crushes on Jackson because she knew he was hers.

   One day Jackson showed up on Ryders door step asking if he could talk to her.
   “Ryder, I really need to talk to you right now.” Confused, Ryder let him in and sat down on the sofa together. Luckily her parents were at work, so they didn’t have to worry about them.
“This isn’t working out Ryd... I realized that I still love Riley. I need to get her back.” Jackson left after he spoke his harsh words. Riley was his ex-girlfriend that he cheated on with a girl named Carson. But Ryder, Josie and Sailor were actually good friends with Riley.
Ryder immediately called Sailor and Josie. The came over right away. They talked and cried with Ryder for hours. Finally Josie spoke up. “Don’t worry Ryd... I’ll get him back.”
Josie and Sailor had a plan.
Josie and Sailor talked to Riley and told her what Jackson did to Ryder. She couldn’t believe that he was the same old Jackson. They shared their evil scheme with Riley and made a game plan. She agreed that she wouldn't reply to his texts, and would ignore him at all times so his feelings for her would vanish.
A few weeks later Josie started texting Jackson, buttering him up, flirting, and leading him on as if she liked him.
“You’re just so cute Jacky-boo,” she would giggle. She got him wrapped around her little evil finger.
Jackson would start making hints to Josie about them going out some day. 
“I wonder if we would make a cute couple,” he would ask.
Most of the time it killed Josie to talk to Jackson knowing how badly he hurt Ryder. The girls would talk about it it when they hung out and would take turns talking to him. Even sometimes Ryder would text him. She wants him to know what it’s like to have your heart broken.
After two months of flirting continuously, Jackson finally asked Josie if she would be his girl. He fell for Josie fast and hard. He felt like he loved her. Which was perfect for the girls plan.
“Would you be my valentine, Josie?” Jackson asked sweetly.
“Jackson... Dear, dear Jackson... You broke my best friends heart. Now it’s your turn...” Josie spoke.
“I like you so much though Josie! That was the past. I’ve changed! I promise,” cried Jackson.
“Ryder means the world to me. You hurt her right to the core. She was in love with you, and you tore her heart in a million pieces. I don’t want that happening to me. Sorry,  Jackson.

5 comments:

  1. This is really good! It is a very good love story, with the broken heart. :) It felt very real. Bondy was right...this should be a movie!

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  2. I love it!! Shows what true friends are like! Totally believable too! Spectacular job!

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  3. This is a great story and it is so true! You did an amazing job!

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  4. You had a good pace and the setting was good too. I like the first line the best.

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